Example HOOKS Essay

Hooks to Inspire

by

Andre R.

A professor asked a student what inspired him to write his essay. The student replied, “The due date.” This joke certainly grabs a reader’s attention. That is what a hook is supposed to do. There are five types of hooks to use in an essay which include, the inverted pyramid, a fact, an anecdote, a rhetorical question, or a bold pronouncement.

The first type of great hook is called the inverted pyramid. It can be thought of as an upside down pyramid. The top is the hook, and the hook slowly narrows down to the thesis with the middle as a transition sentence. Using the example of The Odyssey, you might write: “Usually, you would offer hospitality with love and care, but in The Odyssey, people think from a different perspective. In The Odyssey, people show hospitality because of fear. One theme in The Odyssey by Homer is that fear can control you.” 

The next type of hook to use in your essay is stating a fact or a statistic from a reliable source about what you are writing. Starting your essay with a fact or an interesting statistic really draws the interest of the reader. Again, using an example of The Odyssey: “In The Odyssey, hospitality is a sign of respect for the gods which is an important value according to an IPL.org article on the role of hospitality. Some people learned this the hard way which resulted in their death. This caused fear to spread among the others. One theme in The Odyssey by Homer is that fear can control you.”

The third type of hook you should use in your essay is grabbing the audience's attention by using an anecdote or a personal experience. An anecdote is a small story that explains a point that you are trying to make. For example, “When someone knocks on your door for water, you hand them water but you do not invite them in. We have to be careful of strangers but we still hand them water out of love for our fellow man. In Ancient Greece, you would invite them in, supply them with food and water, and offer a place to sleep. This was because of xenia. Xenia means hospitality which Ancient Greece offered out of fear in case the guest was a god in disguise. One theme in The Odyssey by Homer is that fear can control you.” An anecdote draws the audience in just as a personal experience will.

The fourth type of hook that grabs the attention of the reader is using a rhetorical question. A rhetorical question asks the reader a question without wanting an answer. This type of hook is easy and often overused. Make sure to use this hook with caution. For example, “Do you offer xenia to strangers? What does it mean? Xenia is the Ancient Greek word for hospitality. It was offered out of fear. One theme in The Odyssey by Homer is that fear can control you.” 

The last type of great hook to use in your essay is a bold pronouncement. Stating a bold pronouncement immediately draws the attention of the reader. This causes the reader to be interested and keep reading. Here is an example, “Not letting even one stranger into your home when they knock will be the last thing you do. This was what the Ancient Greeks thought to be true. Believing this, Ancient Greeks handed over the key of their homes to fear. One theme in The Odyssey by Homer is that fear can control you.”

These five different types of hooks are important for a good essay. The most crucial hook to use is the inverted pyramid. All great students should know how to use all five of these inspirational hooks.

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A cool example of a fact or statistic:

The second hook is called fact or statistic. It is imperative that this hook be from a reliable source. If you used this type of hook, then your first paragraph might start: There are 660,000 people in the United States that use Airbnb. Air B&Bs are actually similar in some ways to the ancient Greek form of hospitality, called xenia. In Ancient Greece, people would let strangers into their homes, and supply them with food, shelter, and comfort. Unlike modern day Air B&Bs, the ancient Greek visitor would, in return, leave the host a gift. This ancient form of hospitality was called xenia. Xenia was not granted, as with modern Air B&B owners, out of care for fellow man, the hope to meet new and interesting people, or even to serve as a tour guide for a beloved city. Xenia was not even a small business venture as is often the case with Air B&B hosts. Xenia was rooted in fear. Ancient Greeks believed that strangers might be gods in disguise, and if they failed to show hospitality to the visitor, they might be punished.