Friday, January 1, 2021

Banned Words & Stylistic Techniques w/ Examples

 BANNED WORDS:

come /comes/coming/came

go /goes/going/went/gone/gonna

give /gives/giving/given/gave

get /gets/getting/got/gotten

see /sees/seeing/seen/saw

say /says/saying/said

eat /eats/eating/eaten/ate

look / looks / looking /looked

big /bigger/biggest

pretty /prettier/prettiest/prettily

nice /nicer/nicest/nicely

like /likes/liked /liking

DRESS UPs:

w/w = who or which clause

bc = because

ly = ly adverb

www asia = when while where as since if although

QA = quality adjective

SV = strong verb

OPENERs:

(1) Because

(2) Prepositional (prep)

(3) ly adverb (ly)

(4) ing

(5) www asia

(6) very short sentence (vss)

(7) ed


OPENER Examples:

(1) Because the forecast called for rain, I took my umbrella.

(2) Under the leafy branches of an old oak tree, we found the perfect place for our picnic.

(3) Silently, the cat stalks its prey.

(4) Embracing his mom, the boy told her he was happy she was home.

(5) When the clock struck twelve, the carriage turned back into a pumpkin.

(5) While the teacher taught the lesson, the students remained attentive.

(5) Where there is smoke, there is fire.

(5) As the campfire was lit, the children ran to find the marshmallows, chocolate, and graham crackers.

(5) Since the last rehearsal, the understudy has been perfecting his lines just in case he has to take the stage.

(5) If anyone knocks on the door, be sure to call a parent to answer it.

(5) Although the Bible was the more difficult King James version, the little boy read it every day.

(6) Never swim alone.

(7) Excited about attending Mass, the child bounded out of bed on Sunday morning.

DECORATIONs (DECs):

(D-MET) metaphor

( D-SIM) simile

(D-ALLIT) alliteration

(D-ASON) assonance

(D-Q) Question

(D-QUO) Quotation

(D-vss) vss T/C

(D-4) Foreign lang. phrase

(D-LIT) Literary Allusion/Reference

(D-HIS) Historical Allusion/Reference

(D-AMD) Art, Music, Dance Allusion/Reference

(D-IDIOM) Idiom

(D-ANALOGY) Analogy


M3 Examples:

(M3-adj) Repeating adjectives


(M3-ly) Repeating ly(s) adverbs


(M3-7) Repeating (7)s


(M3-vb) Repeating verbs


(M3-4) Repeating (4)s


(M3-n) Repeating nouns


(M3 intj) Repeating interjections


(M3-o) Repeating onomatopoeias


(M3 vss) Short staccato sentences


M3 Examples:
(M3-adj) The rolling, tumbling, cascading river took him, and he worked hard to stay afloat. (This could also be indicated as M3-ing)

(M3-adj) The sky was a beautiful, bright, blue dome dotted with fluffy white clouds.
(This could also be indicated as an ALLIT)

(M3-ly) My dance teacher told me to move gracefully, confidently, and joyfully.

(M3-7) Amused, charmed, and pleased by the birthday riddle, my uncle chortled in his joy.

(M3-7) Frustrated, frightened, and tired, the child hid under his bed and cried.

(M3-vb) He walked across the bridge, looked out over the edge, and smiled with happiness.

(M3-4) Standing, balancing, and grinning, my ten month old brother gleefully reached for my outstretched hands.

(M3-n) The boys visited shelters, orphanages, and retirement homes in their mission to bring Christmas joy to those who might be lonely.

(M3-n) She won the accolades of her peers, the admiration of her siblings, and the approval of her parents when her book hit the bestseller list. (noun phrases)

(M3-intj) And just like that . . . pow, zap, bang, she disappeared in a cloud of smoke. This could also be indicated as (M3-o)

(M3-intj) What? Yikes! No! When I opened the door, an avalanche of shoes poured down from the mountain of footwear in his closet.

(M3-o) He heard the logs on the fire sizzle, crack, and pop as they warmed the room that cold winter day.

(M3 vss) Rain pounded on the windows. Thunder violently boomed and crashed. Lightning streaked the sky.



OWLs

Anaphora: Repeats a word or phrase at the start of every line or passage. (I Have a Dream - MLK)


Anthimeria: Uses one part of speech in place of another. BEWARE! It can easily become silly and is often overused.


Antiphrasis: uses a word with an opposite meaning for ironic or humorous effect. "We named our chihuahua Goliath."


Appositive: places a noun or noun phrase next to another noun for descriptive purposes.


Chiasmus: reverses of the order of words in the second of two parallel phrases or sentences. A chiasmus reverses grammatical structure, not necessarily w/ the exact same words.

* Antimetabole: reverses the EXACT SAME words in the sentence


Epanalepsis: repeats a similar grouping of words at the beginning of a sentence and at the end. The repeated words act as "bookends.


Epistrophe (AKA: Epiphora): repeats ending words (Gettysburg Address)


Epizeuxis: repeats one word for emphasis


Hyperbole: greatly exaggerates something for emphasis


Metanoia: corrects or qualifies a statement to strengthen it or soften it in some way.


Personification: is figurative.

It projects characteristics that normally belong only to humans onto inanimate objects, animals, deities, or forces of nature. Personification is figurative.


Anthropomorphism is literal.

With anthropomorphism the non-human entities actually do human things. (Thomas the Tank Engine, Winnie the Pooh, Peter Rabbit)

Formatting Basics

TITLE BLOCK FORMATTING
Merriweather 12
1.15 spacing
Centered
Title Bolded
"by" goes directly under the title--> use lower case & do NOT bold
Name goes directly under the "by" & do NOT bold

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ESSAY FORMATTING
Merriweather 12
Double Spaced
Indent 
No extra space between paragraphs
Standard 1" margins

INDICATIONS
BUILDING BLOCKs:
bold and underline the dress up word. 
See below

SENTENCE STARTERs, ENHANCEMENTs, M3s, P2s, OWLS:
All these other stylistic techniques should be indicated before the sentence.
Place the appropriate bolded number, abbreviation, or word inside  bolded parenthesis and highlight in yellow. See below

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REMEMBER: BUILDING BLOCKss are indicated by bolding and underlining the BUILDING BLOCK word

Indication examples:
The teacher who is wearing the red sweater, is very strict.
The dog never jumped on the couch because he was well-trained.
Snow fell as the skiers slalomed down the mountain.

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REMEMBER: SENTENCE STARTERs are indicated by placing the appropriate bolded number, abbreviation, or word inside  bolded parenthesis and highlight in yellow.  

SS indication examples:
(1) Because the thunder boomed, she jumped in fright.
(4) Lifting the little boy's hand, the nurse checked his scraped finger.
(7) Annoyed by the neighbor's rude behavior, my sister stomped her foot in frustration.
(6The ovation pleased the actors.


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CLASSROOM DOC --> NAME & DATE STAMP FORMATTING
Merriweather 11 or 12
1.15 spacing
top left

1st Line:  Name
2nd Line: Date 
3rd Line: Class name and day
4th Line: (Label it): CLASSWORK

CLASS WORK EXAMPLE:

Elizabeth Watson

2-22-23

HARVARD WM Monday

CLASS WORK / Timed Writing


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Friday, May 1, 2020

A Dangerous Plant (SOURCE TEXT)


A Dangerous Plant

In the jungle, a strange plant can be found. It is called the strangler fig. This plant starts as a tiny seed. These seeds are delicious food for birds and they spread them far and wide when they are flying. When one of the tiny seeds is dropped by a bird and falls onto a tree trunk, the poor tree’s future changes. The seed puts out threadlike roots which get nourishment from the air.

At first the strangler fig is small and looks harmless, but it grows quickly. Soon it has shoots going both up into the air and down into the soil. Large leaves develop which keep sunlight from the tree. Its roots entwine themselves around the tree trunk stealing nourishment from it. The strangler fig gets bigger and bigger. It gets stronger and stronger. It becomes more and more of a threat to the survival of the tree. Gradually it strangles the tree to death.
This dangerous plant reminds us of bad habits. They seem so harmless at first, but oh, how quickly they grow! Maybe it is not keeping your promises, putting things off, or never being on time. Maybe it is a little lie, stealing something, or cheating at school. Like the strangler fig, these habits become stronger and stronger. The bad habits that brought momentary pleasure become entwined in our lives. They strangle us. We eventually become their slaves. The famous seventeenth century poet, John Dryden, made this sage observation,  “First we make our habits, and then our habits make us.”


Friday, April 24, 2020

OWLs for you!

OWLs (OUTSTANDING WORDS - LEXICON)                                                                 Advanced Rhetorical Devices                                                                                                            
DETAILS & EXAMPLES:

Anaphora Repeats a word or phrase at the start of every line or passage.              
The use of anaphora creates parallelism and rhythm, which is why this technique is
often associated with music and poetry. However, any form of written work can benefit
from this rhetorical device.
EXAMPLES: 
I Have a Dream   MLK’s speech (last line = greatest idea)
"It rained on his lousy tombstone, and it rained on the grass on his stomach.
It rained all over the place."  The Catcher in the Rye, J.D. Salinger

What the hammer? what the chain, 
In what furnace was thy brain?
What the anvil? what dread grasp, 
Dare its deadly terrors clasp! 
The Tyger, William Blake  (Lines 13 - 16)

"If you prick us, do we not bleed? If you tickle us, do we not laugh?"
~Shakespeare's Merchant of Venice. 

Anthimeria  Using one part of speech in place of another. 
BEWARE! It can easily become silly and is often overused. 
It is definitely (over)used in advertising.
Noun Into Verb
''My sea-gown scarf'd about me.''  Shakespeare
To scarf,' the verbed word  in Hamlet's speech.
Did you just verb that word?
That means making a word that is NOT a verb, act as a verb.
When I was on crutches I would sometimes exclaim, “I will crutch on over to you!” That turned the noun crutch into a verb. 
The “oh-so-posh often ask, “Where do you winter?”
Or, they might explain that  they “summer in the south of France.” 

Anthimeria Nouns to verbs in advertising:
Come TV With Us — Hulu

How to Television — Amazon

Let’s Movie Turner Classic Movies 

Go Krogering — Kroger Grocery Store
          
          Adjective Into Noun
Where Awesome Happens — Xfinity

We Put the Good in Morning — Tropicana
Spread the Happy Nutella
          Interjection Into Noun        More Aaah — Canada Dry
Antiphrasis  uses a word with an opposite meaning for ironic or humorous effect.
"We named our chihuahua Goliath." 

Appositive  places a noun or noun phrase next to another noun for descriptive purposes. 
"Mary, queen of this land, hosted the ball." 
In this phrase, "queen of this land" is the appositive noun that describes Mary's role.

An appositive is similar to a non-defining subordinate clause,
but it doesn't include "which" or "who." It's a word or phrase that can be substituted for a name.
Bob Vance, the president of Vance Refrigeration, married my coworker Phyllis.
Here, you could identify Phyllis's husband as either
"Bob Vance" or "the president of Vance Refrigeration." They are the same person.
You will notice that short or one-word appositives,
such as in the phrase "my coworker Phyllis" do not have to be set off with commas.
If you think a sentence or phrase would be clearer
by setting off a short appositive with commas,
then, by all means, do it. However, it is not absolutely necessary.



Chiasmusthe reversing of the order of words in the second of two parallel phrases
or sentences. A chiasmus will reverse grammatical structure,
not necessarily with the exact same words.
This rhetorical device is also referred to as reverse parallelism or syntactical inversion.
An important subtype of chiasmus is antimetabole.
The main difference between the two is that antimetabole will
reverse the EXACT SAME words in the sentence,
while chiasmus will reverse grammatical structure, not necessarily with the same words.
This literary device was used in Hebrew scripture and ancient Greek writings. 
CHIASMUS  EXAMPLES:  
"By day the frolic, and the dance by night."   ~Samuel Johnson, "The Vanity of Human Wishes"
"His time a moment, and a point his space."   ~Alexander Pope, "An Essay on Man"
"You see things; you say, 'Why?'
But I dream things that never were; and I say 'Why not?'"   
~George Bernard Shaw, Back to Methuselah
"I'd rather die on my feet than live on my knees."   ~Attributed to Emiliano Zapata
"Injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere." 
~Martin Luther King Jr., "Letter from a Birmingham Jail
"Those who have been left out, we will try to bring in.
Those left behind, we will help to catch up."  ~ Richard Nixon, "1969 First Inaugural Address"

 

Antimetabole  (a type of chiasmus)  repeats words or phrases in reverse order.          

Reverses the EXACT SAME words in the sentence



"Ask not what your country can do for you - ask what you can do for your country.”  

~JFK



When the going gets tough, the tough get going.


"But many who are first will be last, and the last will be first."   ~Matthew 19:30


"Do I love you because you're beautiful? Or are you beautiful because I love you?"             
~Oscar Hammerstein, "Cinderella"
Epistrophe (AKA: Epiphora) repeats ending words     EXAMPLES: 
And that government of the people, by the people, for the people,
shall not perish from the Earth.  ~Abraham Lincoln - Gettysburg Address
When I was a child, I spoke as a child, I understood as a child, I thought as a child.
~ Corinthians 13:11

Epanalepsis  (ep-uh-nuh-lep-sis)  bookends

Repeats a similar grouping of words at the beginning of a sentence and at the end. 
The repeated words act as "bookends.

"Blow winds and crack your cheeks! Rake, blow!"   King Lear, William Shakespeare

"Rejoice in the Lord always; and again I say, Rejoice."     Phillippians 4:4

The king is dead, long live the king!

 Always Low Prices. Always"    ~ WalMart slogan

Run, Forrest, run!
The repeated words act as bookends, driving the point home.

Does not have to identical:  
No matter where I end up, I never seem to feel any different or any better
—no matter where I land.                                                             

In fact, epanalepsis often benefits from having slightly different wording,
as the slight change can make it feel more natural and less calculated.
Can be within a longer sentence
He smiled the most exquisite smile, veiled by memory, tinged by dreams.
~To the Lighthouse, Virginia Woolf
A good mnemonic for epanalepsis is to remember that
"p" appears toward the beginning of the word, and is repeated again at the end
(epanalepsis).

 

Epizeuxis    Repeats one word for emphasis. 

The amusement park was fun, fun, fun!”
“Out, damn'd spot! out, I say!”   ~Lady McBeth in Shakespeare’s Macbeth Act 5, scene 1
“Everybody Happy, happy, happy!”   ~Duck Dynasty
Give me a break! Give me a break! Break me off a piece of that Kit Kat bar!
(advertising jingle)
Hyperbole   An exaggeration of ideas for the sake of emphasis.
Hyperbole is an unreal exaggeration used to emphasize a real situation.
This figure of speech is common in day-to-day speech.
(derived from a Greek word meaning “over-casting”)
My great-aunt is as old as the hills. (also a SIM)

Your suitcase weighs a ton!

I am dying of shame. (also a MET)

I am trying to solve a million issues these days.
In our everyday conversations, hyperbole is a common way to
create humor, or to emphasize our stories.
In literature hyperbole has a serious job. 
By using hyperbole, a writer or a poet can make ordinary human feelings remarkable.
Hyperbole intensifies dialogue, narration, and description
so that things and ideas grow beyond being ordinary.
In literature, the use of hyperbole can also develop contrasts.
When one thing is described with exaggeration, and the other thing is presented normally,
a striking contrast is developed. This technique is employed to hook the reader’s attention. 


Hyperbole Example in Literature

Babe the Blue Ox (American Folklore)

In American folklore, Paul Bunyan’s stories are full of hyperboles.
In one instance, he exaggerates winter by saying:
“Well now, one winter it was so cold that all the geese flew backward and
all the fish moved south and even the snow turned blue.
Late at night, it got so frigid that all spoken words froze solid afore they could be heard.
People had to wait until sunup to find out what folks were talking about the night before.”
Metanoia   corrects or qualifies a statement to strengthen it or soften it in some way.  

"You are the most beautiful woman in this town, nay the entire world." 
“To help or, at least, to do no harm.”   The Hippocratic Oath

“And they lived, if not happily ever after, then at least reasonably so.” The Dot and the Line


Personification  (& Anthropomorphism)  the projection of characteristics that
normally belong only to humans onto inanimate objects, animals, deities,
or forces of nature. 

Personification is figurative.
Anytime someone refers to the wind howling or a premonition
like cold fingers up a spine, it’s personification.
When you feel like chocolate is calling your name
or your bed is looking at you invitingly, that’s personification.
You can also represent abstract concepts through personification.
Justice must be blind because people deserve equal treatment under the law, right?
We refer to Father Time and Death with human-like characteristics.

Justice is blind.

The sun smiled down on them.

The stars winked.

The party died down.

The city never sleeps

The wind howled.

The car sputtered and coughed before starting.

Her heart was divided between concern for her sister,
and resentment against all the others.   ~Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen

The rain poured down on the wedding guests, indifferent to their plans.


Anthropomorphism is literal.
This literary technique usually needs some developing
to become truly anthropomorphic.

Speaking animals or objects who talk, think, or behave
like humans are all anthropomorphic.

Think of Thomas the Tank Engine, Winnie the Pooh, or Peter Rabbit.
They literally act as if they are human.

With anthropomorphism the non-human entities actually do human things
like talking, falling in love, wiggling their eyebrows,
and generally behaving like people behave.